7 Earmarks of Highest-Response Offers
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7 Earmarks of Highest-Response Offers

Legendary marketer Clayton Makepeace writes to reveal seven elements he and his clients credit with sparking millions of dollars in direct-mail sales:

  • Great offers begin, Makepeace states, “with a clear, credible explanation of why you’re about to give away the farm. Your prospects have been conditioned by advertisers, who bombard them with 4,000 and more offers a day, to expect the moon. And any marketer who ignores that fact is self-destructive.

    • If Makepeace is right, so-called “layered offers” — you know, what you are selling, plus six free cumquats and three draft choices to be named later — simply may confuse many prospects.

  • Before offering a discount, tell your prospect the specific benefits that make your regular price an amazingly good deal. Then you can state your discounted price without damaging your product’s perceived value.

  • Avoid giving your prospect too many choices. Makepeace urges marketers to offer a low-end price point that will corral the maximum number of customers, plus one or more higher prices in order to increase average dollar sale and return on investment.

    • If you ask your prospect to decide among multiple-choice options after that, Makepeace advises, “your chances of losing the sale increases with every second your prospect spends to decide which offer to go for.”

  • Carefully select your payment terms. For customer acquisition mailings, Makepeace writes, “cash with order is king.” However, from time to time he tests a bill-me-later offer. Test one in a list panel and follow the results.

    • With customer files, Test offering a three or four payment credit-card option in offers that may intimidate customers.

  • The stronger your guarantee, the better. “Cheaping out is the biggest blunder you can make in a guarantee,” Makepeace urges. Guarantee satisfaction for a year — or a lifetime — and you will find that demands for refunds shrink radically compared to those stemming from 60- or 90-day guarantees.

  • Premiums must not give away the store … must reinforce your brand and your core selling proposition … must enhance the appeal of your highest-price product.

    • Makepeace says that he favors timely special reports germane to your product area. Such reports enjoy high perceived value (much higher than a freebie), yet cost little or nothing.

  • Promoting fulfillment. Makepeace says that millions of sales a year are killed because prospects assume it will take too long to receive a purchase.

    • If you deliver faster, or do not charge for shipping and order processing, he advises, say so!


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